Young artists

this short film is talking about Yong Artists. I like this way to shot a film, there are many intview during this film

http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjUzOTY0NjYw.html

the damm fat

                                                                     The Damm Fat

this is a chinese student's short film, a every interesting story. this short film is trying to express this kind of depression emotion for uni students.


http://www.tudou.com/programs/view/KZzfbA_4qaY/

the final script

Actors:




Ming: an overseas student studying Economics. He hates his major and doesn’t’t like the life he is having . He feels very upset about the school life, and feels nervous and confused about his future.



Gang: an overseas student studying Arts, he loves his major, and he has unrealistic confidence about his future. He has dreams but without competence to achieve them.



The story main line:



Ming was one of millions of overseas students. Influenced by family pressure, he had to choose a major that he was absolutely not interested. He feels bored about the school life. Right now he cannot undertake the pressure anymore, and he had to find something to distract his attention.

One day he saw on a piece of throwaway that actors were wanted for a short film, he decided to participate in this short film. When he met Gang (director), they had a nice chat. After Ming read the script, he found that this was an idiotic story with ridiculous logic. But he still wanted to continue doing this short film, he just wanted to do something, something that could take him out of the melancholy life and it didn’t matter what it was.



Then they started to shot first scene at a KTV (Karaoke Singing place), an unpredictable accident happened. Gang found his girlfriend was dating with another guy (Qiang) just next door. This was a big shock for Gang, because he loved and trusted his girlfriend so much, he was so frustrated that he even wanted to give up shotting this film. But Ming didn’t want to abandon this film, he suggested that they could rebuild the script and let Qiang be the main actor, Ming then substituted for Gang being the director. They believed by this way they can firstly revenge Gang during the shot, secondly they can move one and finish the film.



In the end of story, this film was finished. Gang had achieved his goals. However Ming went back to his normal life, he wanted to be a participant in the beginning, but in the end he was still a spectator.

This short film is trying to express this kind of depression emotion for students. By dramatic story, this film expresses the nervous and perplexed of students about their life and future.





Scene 1



Qiang came back from the bathroom, continued flirting with the actresses. At this time, Gang rushed into the room with some other guys accidentally.



Qiang: What the fuck is happening? What the fuch are you doing?

Gang: You, son of a bitch, how dare you flirting with this girl!

Qiang: Stop! You, stopping beating! We are shotting a film! Stop right now!

Gang: What the hell are you talking? I can’t hear a thing!

Qiang: We are shotting a film, shotting a film!

Gang: Shotting a film? What a fucking film you are shotting!



Qiang try to explain what are they doing, but Gang did not delieve. Gang kept punch him, in the end they put a bag on his head.



The film name, actor, and so on



Scene 2



In this scene, Qiang personate a rich guy who is entry a party, and he try to molest a girl, the girl slapped Qiang in the face.



(School party)



Gang: Your posture is wrong, look at me, lower your eyelevel, and hold tightly the stick. Remember in pool, it’s all about the angles.

The girl adjusted her posture

Gang: This is all wrong, I shall teach you this. (then he moved closer and grasped the girl’s waist. He was trying to pretend he was helping, but he was really taking advantage of the girl.

The girl struggled to free herself from Gang

Girl：You pervert! (Then hit hard on Gang’s face)

(Ming called out: cut!)

Ming: (instructing the girl) your hit is unprofessional, if you don’t do it with great force, how could you let your audience know you are trying to hit him but not just touching him?

(Repeat shotting the scene so many times and in the end, Ming’s voice over: what? You are asking what the heck we are doing. We are shotting a film, just shotting a film, nothing else…)







Scene 3



Ming: Me, a temporary director, trying to fill my empty and depressed life, with such a shitty script, with such a bunch of shitty guys.



Ming hold a notebook, he make every tick after the achievement.



1。Hit his face.

2。Stand on under the burning sun.

3。Qiang Refused by a girl.

4。Qiang Punched by Ming at Ktv.





Scene 4

The down stair of the apartment

Burning sun.

Ming: yes, just hold on with this posture, that’s exactly what I want.



Qiang hold the flower and looked up the window of girl. The girl closed the window. 1-2 hours after all flowers were burning. Qiang was burning as well.



Scene 5

In the school, Qiang tried to date with a girl by refused.

He tried to buy a lunch for a girl by refused.

He tried to send a girl home by refused.





Scene 6



The last one tick.

Ming: Next scene, it’s the girl’s birthday, you guys are going to the Karaoke to celebrate. You guys, drink and laugh, I don’t care what you are laughing at. Gang and the girl, you guys are trying to make out.



After they shot this scene, Qiang feel that the actress are interested in him, and he try to talk with director and find the way date with her.



Gang: Hi director, do you think the girl is interested in me?

Ming: (whispering to Gang) I guess you could be right.

Gang: (laugh with treacherously) Can I ask for a favour? Can you help me out for this?

Ming: Alright buddy, we are leaving. And we are handing over this girl to you now.

Gang laughed again innocently.





After this conversation

Ming gives Gang a call

Ming: Everything went smoothly, it’s your show time now.



One week ago



Scene 7

Ming: Going to class, going home, have dinner, watch TV, looking for part-time job (switching between scenes of Ming’s life) these are all I have done during my study in this foreign country. I don’t know what exactly I am doing every day, but I know this is not I want, I have to stop, I have to find a thing to make me stop this life.

At this moment, I have found something to do. (Ming find a a piece of throwaway and he gives Gang a call)



Scene 8



Gang: How do you think? Isn’t my script well-written? (then Ming got too drunk and fell).

Ming: Actually I didn’t tell him then that this is the worst story I have ever seen. I didn’t tell him because I didn’t want to destroy it, because it was the only thing I can do.



They stared to prepare everything and stared to shot.



Scene 9

XXX KTV

Ming comes to the KTV, and celebrates the girl birthday. During the shot, they drink and laugh, they look like so happy.



Gang: Cut! Not elegant, not elegant enough. Didn’t you say you have experience in acting?

Ming: Exactly, I have participated in a drama production in primary school.

Gang: alright alright. I have enough. Let’s try to have another shot, elegant you understand? You are the “elegance-man” from now on.

Come on, elegance.

At this moment, Ming is attracted by another window.

Ming: Come on, come on and see!



Inside of this room, Gang’s girlfriend date with a guy(which he is Qiang) Gang try to rush into the room, and Ming stopped him.











The day after



Scene 10

Ming didn’t want to abandon this film, he suggested that they could rebuild the script and let Qiang be the main actor, Ming then substituted for Gang being the director



Gang: I had enough, I am not doing this anymore. Buddy, sorry I have to do this to you. (Smoking)

Ming: … I am wordless. (silence for a few seconds)

Ming: Are you sure you want to end here?

Gang: I am so sorry, I am not in the mood to do this anymore.

Ming: What about your girl friend?

Gang: …. (silence) no idea, I have no idea indeed.

Ming: What about this, I become the director now, and you try to look at it from the positive side. This is just part of our life, and you have to deal with it and move on. I promise to solve your problem.

Gang: (look at Ming suspiciously, and took a deep breath.)



Right now the story connect with scene 1



Scene 11



Gang’s home

Gang: come on and wake up.

Qiang: (waked up slowly)

Gang: have you get it?

Qiang: sorry mate we are making a film, really. If you don’t believe you can give my director a call.

Gang: Really? Making a film? By you? Are you sure you are not from the primary school’s drama society? Let me make it clearly to you, you were making out with our girl, do you want to refresh your memory again?

Qiang: Brother I promise I haven’t made out with your girl. We were really just making a film, how can I let you believe?

Gang: (frustrated) what a fuck are you talking about? What bloody film are you making? Making a film or making out with my girl? (and started as if he wanted to hit Qiang).





Ming: Our film lost in the competition without suspense. Gang and Yi went back together again. Everything went back as before, and I went back to my normal life too. The whole thing ended ridiculously, as its ridiculous start. I still have no idea what I have done with the whole thing. I realise, I have always wanted to be a participant in life, and however I always ended up as a spectator.



Interview (Overseas student, what are they true feeling about overseas life)



end

second scrip

人物：

小明：海外留学生，商科。讨厌自己的专业，讨厌自己的生活现状。对自己的生活有着强烈的不满，对自己的未来感到迷茫和不安。

小刚：海外留学生，艺术系。热爱自己的专业，对自己的未来莫名其妙地乐观。满怀理想，却没有实现理想的能力。

小明认识包子，不太熟。

小刚和包子不认识。

故事 主线：作为众多海外留学生中的一个的小明，像大部分留学生一样迫于生活的种种，选了一个自己完全没有兴趣的专业，过着百无聊赖的留学生活。就在他快承受不住这种压抑的情绪，极度渴望找一件事情分散这种情绪的时候，在校园的某个地方看到了招募短片演员的宣传单，于是拨通了联系人（小刚）的电话。小刚约小明商讨事宜并把自己的剧本给小明看。剧本主要描述的是一个富二代在国外糜烂的留学生活。。。小明发现这是一个很烂的剧本，除了剧情三俗，逻辑也含糊。但是小明并没有说破，因为还算是交代了一个完整的故事，更因为他只是想找一件事，而这件事是什么对他来说并不重要。

然后就在拍摄的第一天，在拍摄现场的ktv里，小刚意外发现自己的马子和另外一个真的富二代厮混在一起。这让他无心继续拍摄，甚至有了放弃拍摄的打算。按时小明出于自身原因不想让这件事搁浅，所以提议改编剧本并让富二代来担任主角。一方面可以从中整富二代以达到报复的目的，另一方面又可以继续完成片子。

故事的最后，片子拍完了却没有获奖，小刚整人的目的达到了 情绪得到了宣泄。而小明再度回到了回来的生活。

片头

包子上完厕所回去后，k房里有多了几个人。

包子：哟，导演把保镖都请来了。

继续和妞在那唱歌卿卿我我，边唱边和小妞调情。此时的包子有些醉意。

包子当着小刚的面继续和妞清热。

包子嫌他们碍事：今天的戏排完了你们怎么还不走，走走走，别碍事。

这时候大家都看着他没有走的意思。

包子；得得得，（不耐烦了，边说边从钱包里掏钱给小费）。

小刚给了包子一拳。（慢动作特写）

小刚：草尼玛，这妞是你泡的吗？

包子：别打了，我们是在拍戏，别打了。

小刚说：你说什么我听不到。

包子：我们在拍戏，我们在拍戏！！！！

小刚：拍戏！拍你吗b戏！

小刚表明身份是这妞的男朋友。罐他喝酒，打他，等等。最后包子一边哭一边介绍是在拍戏，没人相信。麻袋一套。

拍摄

从厕所跟拍包子进ktv，包子开门，给个ktv里的镜头（从包子的视野）＋包子说话。镜头切换从ktv里给的包子镜头，包子走到小妞边上，拿起话筒唱歌（身体舞动，表现的比较欢，拉起小妞一起唱歌，搂搂抱抱）镜头不断的切换，不同角度（这里拍2－3次）。包子唱歌的同时穿插给镜头小刚的表情。

唱到一半，包子嫌小刚和几个朋友碍事，过去叫他们出去。给个包子脸部特写厌恶的表情，然后镜头跟拍包子过去。音乐声音很大，包子大喊大叫，小刚没有反应看着包子，等包子掏钱准备给小刚的时候，小刚给包子一脚踢到。（这个时候歌曲的音乐要欢快，诡异的，可以类似中国古乐）小刚起身和2个人一起揍包子，镜头给远景，和近景包子被打的表情。小刚边打边骂他，音乐声音很大覆盖过去，包子求饶。音乐突然停住，包子大叫到：我们在拍戏，我tm的是演员！（镜头给包子特写）小刚给包子一个头套套住（镜头从包子的视角，镜头被套上，镜头黑。

名字 字幕 演员介绍

剧组的其中一场戏，富二代包子饰演的角色（鸡鸡）在酒吧和一个姑娘调情。就在鸡鸡伸出手揩油的时候，被姑娘甩了一耳光。

（学校party）

包子：你这个姿势不对，看好球眼睛放低，手抓稳球杆。

小妞比划了一下

包子：不对不对，我来教你，说着凑过去，从后面抱着小妞，帮他打，同时揩油。

小妞扭动身体挣脱包子

姑娘骂：流氓！然后给了一耳光

（这小明所饰演的导演喊：卡）

（小明过去指导姑娘，说：你这一巴掌给得太不专业了，你不用力怎么能让观众知道你是在打他而不是在摸他呢）

重复若干轮，在最后给出的一季很重的耳光地方定格 此时小明独白：什么？你问我们在干什么？拍戏啊！）

拍摄

学校party，20人＋

镜头跟拍小A手拿喝的，顺场走一圈，不断和人打招呼，做个场景介绍

这里给镜头看电影的，玩纸牌的，台球的，乒乓球的，还有人弹钢琴，等等。

小A走完，镜头顺势转移到包子身上，包子在和一姑娘打台球。包子和小妞对话，镜头转换，（拍2次，取次中景，取次近景）然后包子过去指导，给个包子脸部表情萎缩镜头，给个小妞被欺负了委屈，愤怒的镜头，然后小妞扭动身体，挣脱包子，给包子一耳光（从姑娘背后取景，给包子被打了的特写）。

导演叫卡，导演入境指导。导演自己上场教姑娘怎么打，亲自示范。

小妞也演练了几遍，最后一次小妞使出很大力打包子时，画面定格。

小明独白。

scene 7 节奏稍快

小明独白（把整包子的部分用列表的形式列出来，然后在完成一个后打上勾）

小明：我，一个零时导演，和一个烂本子，在加上一个烂人。来打发这压欲无趣的生活。

小明手里拿着一个单子，边说边把第一项打上勾。

镜头跟小明，小明手拿着一叠纸，在第一项打耳光打勾，然后在第2项公车站上也打上勾。

（1。打耳光

2。暴晒（最后脸部特写，暴晒后的黑色（夸张）大汗淋淋）

4。泡妞被拒绝。

7。Ktv喝醉进错房间被整（小刚扮演黑社会）最后一项

）

每拍一项都打一个勾

某公寓下，包子准备像一妞表白

大太阳，（快拍一天24小时，中午为起始点，把太阳当头，日落，日出，太阳当头，一个24小时循环，）

这场戏，为了表现一个日升日落的效果，包子不得不在太阳下暴晒。

（镜头给个远景，然后快速拉近，特写在包子脸上，大滴大滴的汗珠，滴落。小明：就保持这个姿势，要的就是这样的效果。包子抬头向2楼女孩的窗外看去，这个时候女孩漏个头从窗帘里，然后关上窗帘。从地上给角度拍摄包子的表情，同时太阳，手上的花也在镜头里，然后每1－2小时变换一次。取同一个景太阳不同角度，和花在太阳下暴晒后枯萎，最后到黄昏。包子晒倒。

远景，速拍

在学校包子包粟花去追姑娘，被拒绝！

在学校为姑娘买lunch，被拒绝！

开车送姑娘回家，被拒绝！

等等

Scene 9

最后一项。

小明把最后一个勾打上：下面一场戏里，女主角过生日，去ktv庆祝一番。

大家在一起喝酒，起哄，包子和小妞卿卿我我。

剧情里有个漂亮mm和包子配戏，出现在kvt场景1里。

中场休息后，（厕所）包子去找小明谈心讨论这妞对他有意思，要小明帮他搞定此妞。

包子和妞玩的很高，喝了很多酒，就在包子去上厕所的时候，小刚和黑帮演员进ktv设置dv准备偷拍，小明陪包子去上厕所，告诉他剧组拍完了走了，剩下的就他自己把握了，能不能搞定她就看包子自己的本事了。

小明去上厕所，包子跟进去。

包子：导演，你觉得小妞是不是对我有意思。

小明；（凑过去，包子耳边）你别说我看有点意思。

包子奸笑；导演做回月老怎么样？

小明；那要不今天我们先撤了，小妞就交给你了

包子天真的笑了

拍摄

包房里，给个远景，大家一起玩一起唱歌，给小妞过生日，吹蜡烛，然后小明叫卡，大家休息下。

镜头给小明出门，然后包子跟上去，倒厕所。

从包子和小明的角度各拍一次，一共2次。

（拍摄完毕后导演小明，给小刚打电话，把这一天如何打包子的情况给他说了下。）

镜头给小明，小明给小刚打电话；事情办的顺利，一会看你自己了。

(一个星期前)

场景2

给一个天花板的镜头，小明独白：这是我每天睁开眼看到的第一个场景，它预示着我生活的开始。。。（描述自己压抑的生活状态。在独白的同时，镜头做一些简单的切换，配合独白内容）

独白进行到最后：此时，我必须找一件事情来做！小明发现宣传栏上的招募演员宣传单，拨通了小刚的电话，场景以小刚在电话中的一声喂作为结束。

场景3 （取景未定）

两人（小明和小刚）边谈边喝酒，小刚：怎么样，我的剧本不错吧！（说完醉倒） 小明手拿着酒，躺下。（此时镜头从上方用zoom 拉特写）小明独白：其实我当时没有告诉他，这可能是我看过最烂的剧本，我没有这么做是因为我不想破坏它，因为它是我能做的唯一一件事）

挑演员（挑各种演员），接器材，然后各种准备工作，开始开机了（快拍）

Scene 3

XXX KTV

小明一身帅气来到xxx KTV，进场和服务员打招呼，进包间（镜头跟拍特写小明一路进场）。

进包间后和大家寒暄，和生日妞拥抱，罚酒。然后突然灯被打开，小刚导演说cut。

小刚导演嫌小明演的不够潇洒，要再来一条。

小刚：cut， 不够潇洒啊，你不是说你有过演出经验吗。

小明：对啊，我小学参加话剧社呢。

小刚：行行行，不跟你贫，抓紧时间再来一条，潇洒懂吗，潇洒，你Y现在是潇洒哥，来！潇洒！

小明这个时候被另一间包房吸引了，他示意小刚不要吵过来看。

小明：（对小刚招手，做个静音的动作）来来来，快来看。

小刚这一看不要紧，直接楞住了。当他放映过来的时候，就要像里面冲进去。

小明即时拉住他，两人拉扯一会，好不容易小明把小刚托回了自己包间里。

镜头不断的转换，从包间里面看他们在外面拉扯，包间里小妞和包子唱k，卿卿我我一点也没注意到门外的事情。

（用些慢画面，肢体语言，片段，定格）来个小刚苦逼脸特写

ktv后第2天

苦逼脸小刚特写（要没精神，眼睛貌似哭肿，化妆）。小刚这下子被吓到了，完全不知道该怎么办，怎么做，他已经没有心思去继续拍摄电影了，有了放弃的念头。这时候小明出头接过了担子，他做导演为小刚表演一出闹剧。把包子叫进剧组为男主角。

小刚：算了，不拍了，兄弟对不住了。（抽烟）

小明：。。。。。。。无语了（沉默几秒）

小明：就这么算了？

小刚：对不住了，我现在真没心情拍了。

小明：我说你老婆的事。

小刚：。。。。。。（沉默几秒）不知道，我真的不知道。

小明：要不这样，我来做导演，兄弟你看开点，生活就是这么草蛋。你的事我帮你解决。

小刚：疑惑的看了看小明，然后深深的吸了口烟。

（8倍速度快放 正接故事）

小刚家，大家开始布置场景。

小刚把包子弄醒后，质问他，知道犯了什么错。包子还在解释说是在拍戏。小刚一直在说你泡了我的妞，包子依然没弄明白。

小刚：哎哎哎，醒醒。

包子：（睁开眼睛）

小刚：抽了口烟，你弄明白没有？

包子：大哥我们是在拍戏，真的是在拍戏，不信你给我们导演打电话。

小刚：就你还拍戏？又是小学话剧社的吧？这么说吧，你泡了我的妞。你在仔细想想。

包子：大哥我真没泡你的妞，我们真的在拍戏啊，你怎么就是不相信呢。

小刚：（火了）拍戏拍你吗b戏。叫你泡我的妞（边说边挥手，准备要打的时候）依开门进来了。

这时候，依进家来了，包子和依都楞了楞。然后他们在里面大声的吵了起来。小明站在窗户外面静静的看着他们，镜头画面从小明的视角出发。慢慢的模糊。

小明独白：我就这么的导演了一场生活狗血剧，看着他们哭，笑，吵得不可开交。有时候我在想为什么我改变不了自己的生活。在这个鸟不生蛋的地方，一直这么压欲着，每次想做点什么，最后还是个旁观着，我依然只是哥旁观者。

                          

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学校

学校，比赛结束了，小刚和小明两人抽着烟，小刚并没有得奖，不过小刚表现得很高兴，他最后和依和好了，这层纸谁也没有捅破，小刚对这个结果很满意。小明依然回到了他原来得生活。

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